That vow only lasted a month.
Since today is Tuesday, teaser Tuesday, I wanted to share the first 150 words of each first page for comparison. I still love the old opening, a lot actually, but I want to give this new one a shot too. Lately, the query gods haven't been on my side. The first page is always the hardest to get right, wouldn't you agree?
Thanks for taking the time to read you guys.